Other works & deleted/alternate scenes from published books

Here’s some more stuff for you to read, and a look at my editing process…
I hope you will enjoy this fresh material. Disclaimer: all spelling mistakes and typos are mine!

 

5 Seconds of Joy and
the Aftermath: a Short
Story of Nearly Nothing

One morning, an elderly man stands on the edge of a hospital’s rooftop, ready to take his last step. Like the proverbial saying goes, he remembers significant moments of his life.

When there is nothing good to think about, the only thing left is…

This (tiny) story is so different from everything else I’ve ever written. I honestly don’t know where it came from… it just is.

The first draft was written on a Saturday or Sunday afternoon way back in 2008. Back then, it wasn’t much of anything, just one or two pages long. But something about it kept clawing at me, in the back of my head, and it wouldn’t let go.

Maybe it’s the sadness of the piece or the way the story unfolds… but either way, I couldn’t leave it unfinished. So every other month, I would re-read it, add a few words, polish it.

I finally published it, in 2012. And I still love it very much.

Funny trivia: by happenstance, this story was proofread/edited by Louis Warner, lead singer of the London-based rock band High Above The Storm.

This entire chapter died when I edited, Russian Dolls, the first book of The Neve & Egan Cases.

Though I had a lot of fun writing it, I felt it slowed down the pacing and postponed the ending too much. Though it pained me greatly, it had to go.

But it has Lexa being uncomfortable at a public event, all the while wearing a fancy dress and high-heels… so I couldn’t let it disappear entirely, right?

Chapter 22
(a deleted scene from Russian Dolls)

Neve and Egan are invited to an official event by the Mayor of London himself. 

It’s time for the detective duo to pull out the cocktail dress and tuxedo…

Lucky Number Thirteen
(a deleted scene from Danse Macabre)

Alexandra Neve knows to be weary of arms dealers, thief, and arsonists. One thing she never thought she should be mindful of is Egan in a gambling house.

If she’d known… she wouldn’t have let him carry all of the company’s savings.

This was the first opening of the book. I really enjoyed it, because it showed Egan in a different light (and Lexa in a dress and heels again!).

When the first draft was finished and I started editing the manuscript, I realized something was off with it. There’s nothing wrong with this opening per se… it just doesn’t fit well with the rest of the story.

Maybe it’s because Danse Macabre is the darkest book of the series. This book’s twisted, with a lot of gruesome deaths… and this opening was just too cheerful and light-hearted to blend in nicely.

Sadly, it had to go… but you can still enjoy it here.

Very early on, this was the prologue of Hostile Takeover, the first story in my Vale Investigation series.

Mid-way in, I completely scrubbed it and chose to introduce the main character differently.

Also… the tone wasn’t quite right, don’t you think?

Prologue
(alternate scene from Hostile Takeover)

What would you do, if you knew the exact date of your death?